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Post by kidradd342 on Sept 23, 2006 21:28:19 GMT -5
Name:Alishu Yori
Race:Half Hollow (Hollow and Human)
Age:30
Gender:Male
World of Origin:Earth
History:Alishu's History at this time is currently unknown
Weapon:Fists,Claws
Appearance:(Human Form)Black Hair,White Skin,Brown Cloak,Black Shoes,Blue Jeans,Normal Human Brown Eyes (Half Hollow Form)Hollow Mask,Hollow Armor going all over his body, Claws,Yellow Glowing Eyes,Same Clothes hair and skin are hidden by Armor (Complete Hollow Form)Weird Red Designs appear on Armor and Mask ,Claws grow bigger,No more clothes just the Hollow Armor,Tail covered by armor,Demon wings that are also covered by the armor,walks on the ground on all fours like a animal
Abilities: Teleportation(allows him to teleport anywhere) Hell's Gate Opening(Opens the gate to hell) Great Roar(so loud it makes you cover your ears only in complete hollow form) Shield(Alishu makes a shield out of reiatsu) More to Come
Personality:Angry,Stubborn,Evi,Manipulative,Hateful
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Post by Lunar Angel on Sept 23, 2006 21:44:02 GMT -5
I'll talk to Satio about this later.
But for now, I'm going to say you need a history, and some a good bit of detail for things. I mean there has to be a reason that you're half hollow, and how that came to be, and why you can open the Gate's of Hell, which mind you no living being can go through.
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Post by kidradd342 on Sept 23, 2006 22:17:34 GMT -5
History gets revealed in RPG later Alishu is supposed to be Mysterious
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Post by Lunar Angel on Sept 23, 2006 22:33:42 GMT -5
I'll talk to Satio then, but as of know, I myself am saying you're going to need more than this, because you can't just do things, or be able to just Open the Gate's of Hells. There has to be at least something behind it all.
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Post by Saito-Sama on Sept 24, 2006 9:26:26 GMT -5
Yeah...you'll need some more...you should explain the reason he is Half Hollow-Half Human. Things like that just don't happen. Plus, no need to hide the history or have it revealed later, since other characters won't know crap about him in the beginning anyway.
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